When every moment, everyday, you echo in my system
I wonder if you think of me once in every autumn.
Thousand times in thousand ways, of thousand things I think of you
And wonder if into your thoughts my thoughts do ever blossom.
Every night, in every dream, in every face I look for you
And wonder if you notice me in that hazy land of black and blue.
I close my eyes to catch a glimpse; your image eludes me all the time
I see the lips, the nose I see, but eyes evade your paradigm.
In every song, in every word, is everything I do not say
And wonder if you’ll bring to life the dead I bury everyday…
In all of that and everything I wonder if there’s light at all
And everyday I put it out for hope is painful anyway….
Everyday, in every dream, I look again to look for me
And wonder if I still do smile in the shattered pieces that I see;
Every time your eyes evade my dreams arise to be set free
I ponder when you’ll echo again and I’ll dissolve and cease to be.
Tuesday, May 08, 2007
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14 comments:
wow...ananya too good poem..it relly shows da hidden love of u from da special one out there....the lines r extravagant..n the philosipical way of expressing ur thoghts is simply mind blowing..!..i m ur fan now...take care n keep posting...!
no words fr complement it's just ultimate......brilliant wrk ananya...
darlin...i always keep on wondering where it comes to u frm...but then i realize its a gift bestowed to u ;)
its a real cool poem...good use of words...i liked it vry much .....keep up the good work :)
hi really nice.wah kya likha hai...
hi good job
hey
the adited version is also nice
one thing reflects from both
version is that u r truely
sweetheart,writing like this
need lots of lovely feelings,
emotions,and care for sumone or
for everyone,
if this poem is about anybody
than he s the loveliest and luckiest persion on earth
this s what i think
ur heart is ANANYA
ur feelings r ANANYA
ur collection of words is ANANYA
saneness in the mad..
hii dear........
gr8 work....u r not only a good artist but also a good poetess...
....:)
its a really nice work from u...words used in poem n rhythm is fabulous.....keep up writtin good ones...;)
this is a nice thought but the words do not seem to do justice to your thought process...
coming from you - this doesn't hit the quality that you have set as an expectation from yourself...
hope to see more of your wonderful works soon
poem is good but you can do better.
no words...simply no words can describe my views...excellent work..keep it up...
What a wonderful way to express yourself. :)
But its really painful reading you like this. I wish i will see you pouring some equally wonderful yet joyful emotions in near future.
ur work speaks for itself , for u ...no comments....i don't think myself worthy enough to comment...to me it comes from some other world...its awesome...keep it up...gr8!!!
Hey ananya ..one thing is for certain that if you make "the special one" read this he will think about you every autumn,every spring, every summer, every winter ....you will echo in his system every moment and he wont lose your sight even in the hazy land of black and blue and your thought will resonate in his every word ....The poem is so so beautifully written ...
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