It’s a song I cannot sing,
A tune I must not hum;
But every time I walk alone,
My eyes just don’t keep mum.
It’s everytime that I don’t think
I am only thinking of you;
When everytime I turn around
You are all I am looking through.
It’s a dream I must not see,
And dreams I have but few;
But everytime I notice me
It’s just not me its you.
A million people walk my world,
There are thousand things to do;
But of everything that there can be
All I can feel is you.
You are the song I must not sing,
The tune I must not hum,
The dream I must not see;
But dreams I have just few…
-Ananya Kushwaha
About Me
- Ananya Kushwaha
- iam but a tiny soul....always in search of "who am I".....a particle in the sand falling from someone's hand trying to figure "how do i matter"....I am but no one....Iam everything....everyone....I AM MY GOD!
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8 comments:
gr8 work...cant tell u how touching it is...i think anybddy who has been in luv wud jst cry hearing it...
hey ananya..wat can i say abt ur poem.its fabulous....doth makes me feel dat somewhere there lies a loneliness in you..
the one you dreamt of
should not have been begotten
whom u refuse to see now
shouldn't have been forgotten
so don't refuse to dream of him
coz he's the one who'll help u sleep
nd search his face among others darling
his prescence in life is what u need ......... :)
ha ha ha....nw dat was a vague rhymin passage.....lolzzz... but giv it a thought.. :P
tak care..nd keep up ur good work.... :)
wat cn i say bout ur work,tis just fab,awesome ur poem was just....see i dnt hav words...am overwhelmed.
wen i read it, it felt like u've written exactly wat i feel,wat i go thru sumtimes...it just touched.
n ur quite a wizard wid brushes too...
hats off to u ananya
hmmm...i donno this girl very well...bt the way she expresses herself through the words n art...its really amazing....the poem is not what exactly wat it seems if we go in depth it really has a philosipical meaning...which is nt only abt her...bt also abt every othher person...waid a go ananya......
arre chori
tu to bahut accha likti hai re..
its really gud work keep it up..
well
sorry yaar mujhe ye tumse nahi kehna chahiye tha lekin tumse jhoot bolna accha nahi lag raha tha isliye actually maine tumhari poem padne ki bahut koshish ki magar pehla para hi nahi samajh main aaya..i think ye poem un logon ko samajh main aayegi who r in luv sorry maam..
A really nice use of Mesodiplosis.
A really nice work and really very touching.
But, I wish the sensitivity you have shown here is limited to the creativity only. Coz life will be really tough with such a depth of emotion becoming real.
well i see more than one layer in this work.
though, undoubtedly the first thought is love.
the second thought is of a dream, a passion, a desire.. kayi baar hamari khwahishein hi aise baar baar samne aati hai.
Ananya... this one gets you a thoughtful look and a smile after that!
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